Tuesday, July 14, 2009

THE POEM by TIMZ

INTRODUCTION

I'm tim, still awake looking for a good rhyme,
It's 2 in the morning i think this would be a good time,
to get it all together and put the words where it should.
I hope you'll appreciate the rhyme and the poem and
comment me that it's good.

THE POEM

The Posterior Pituitary,

important part of the body,
read this poem and imagine
as if i was telling you a story.

It releases hormones Vasopressin & Oxytocin,
some stay in the body and some injected within.
I'll now explain each of their functions so you better listen,
all you got to do is sit, chill, lend me your eyes and your ears.
I'll start now with a bow so better wipe all your tears.

Oxytocin improves muscle contraction of the uterus during delivery,
listen y'all mamas who's pregnant gettin' ready for their babies.
It is also responsible for the ejection of milk,
all you babies getting ready being wrapped up with silk.
They say a simple hug can trigger oxytocin's release,
what more if their daddies give their momie's a kiss.

Next in line is ADH other name is vasopressin,
help the kidneys regulating excretion of urine.
Insufficient amount may lead to Diabetes Insipidus,
D.I. ain't a joke, it's serious so help me Papa Jesus.
Excess amount may lead to SIADH, if i'll transcribe it would be
Syndrome of Inappropriate Antidiuretic Hormone Secretion.

That would be all folks,
let's just call this a night.
Don't make me write more
or we'll just end up in a fight.
So peace out homies, classmates and pips,
just contact me, who knows maybe i'll give you a tip.


composed by:
-GOLDENBOY-03-timimz-03-GOLDENBOY-

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14 comments:

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  2. COMMENTOR: Hey this is a good poem, and a good rhyme.
    TIMZ: Thank You!
    COMMENTOR: Your Welcome! i'm looking forward in your next poem.
    TIMZ: Oh it will be soon, don't you worry Sir.
    COMMENTOR: Oh! Really!? I can't wait!
    TIMZ: :) Thanks for the comment sir.
    COMMENTOR: No Problem.

    LOL XD

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  3. nice rhyme kuya timz, it makes me laugh and think at the same time. it's very simple yet informative. i hope you can make more poems like that can easily be understand. keep it up..;p

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  4. what was the first comment all about???! haha. very nice poem indeed. your rhymes are there but others were missing. your poem is very informative and educational. good work.

    p.s. golden boy - timz?? mmm.. o, i got it. golden boy as in golden Buddha!

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  5. what do you mean others are missing mr. sy? :)

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  6. nice poem.. the rhyming and the harmony of the word that you used is there..but sometimes,,getting a little tripped on there..but the content is good..well-detailed..good job!

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  7. hi timz.. when im reading your poem it made me smile,, this poem is very nice and a nice rhyming with the words too..

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  9. wow kuya nice poem, very informative about your topic..., good work

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  10. nice poem timz..hahaha..great job..=)

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  11. Great poem Timmy. It is good to the ears with the rhymes, and gives sufficient information about your topic.Keep writing.

    /VBG

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  12. Cool!

    A rapper is born! Congratulations in making such a fine piece of poetry.

    Well done! Now, where is the back ground rap music?

    Z

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  13. Thank You Doctor Z,

    The background beat is hard to compose. LOL
    So i made it acapella. :)

    I'm glad you enjoyed.

    Thanks for the VISIT!

    Godbless :)

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  14. Mam G'

    Thank You! Your comments inspired me to write even more.

    Godbless! :)


    -tmz

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